![]() One thing that you must keep in mind, though, is that you shouldn't JUST give them flaws. ![]() To be honest, a character with no flaws is bland, overused, not realistic and boring. I feel like this is something that everybody needs to remember this while making an oc. The fluffy BloodClan cat tells her that he could've handled that himself, and she. Finally, they are able to fight them off, sending the dogs retreating into the shadows of the alley. She leaps in to help, but the dogs continue to advance on the two cats. She sees a strange black tom with a red BloodClan collar cornered by three large dogs. She struggles as a rogue to survive, facing rats, other loners, and dogs. She says goodbye to her sister (Ravenfrost) one night, and leaves, without informing any other Clanmember. Many begin to despise her, making her feel alone. Many terrible things happen because of her mistakes, and she no longer feels she has a place in the Clan. As an apprentice, Emberflight ('paw' at the time) was a bit foolish, with an attitude. She gets into conflict with her mentor, Foxblaze, resulting in hatred for each other. Just for fun, I'm writing a super-edition called "Emberflight's Choice", and avoid making Emberflight too perfect. It's very important to make your characters flawed, though, since it makes them interesting. Glad that the top spot is taken by an actually good piece of advice, "no unrealistic Colors" is a stupid and unnecessary rule, and it certainly doesn't deserve second place, much less first.
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